Preliminary task working process

Evaluation:

In order to make my video the best possible video is can be, I need to improve my current plan in order to be successful. If I changed these features that may not be correct or relate to how a movie is presented, then my video will be a good reflection of the task needed to complete. I would need to change the shot taken when Emma opened the door, when Emma goes from being inside to outside and when Emma goes to the bench in which Josh is sitting on.

• When Emma opens the door, a full body shot should of been taken to indicate that Emma is going towards the door and is about to open/enter through it. This is a shot that I did not take so therefore my plan was not successful in making sure that the audience is able to tell that she is going through a door.

• A shot of Emma has been taken at 0:26 inside a corridor. Another shot is taken of Emma at 0:28 outside the building she was just in. These two shots have not been taken properly because the second shot does not indicate how she got out of the building. A shot of her exiting the building needed to be taken in order to make the plan better. If this would've been done, the plan would've been more successful if I simply used that specific shot.

• When Emma exits the building, she walks over to where Josh is sitting and a shot has been taken of her journey. A shot that I didn't include was a shot of Josh sitting on the bench with a space next to him (where Emma was going to sit). By including this shot, I would've given direction for the audience as to where Emma was going to go to have the conversation.

• At the end of the plan, I should have included a shot of one of the people leaving the scene/exiting the conversation. This would've shown the audience that the conversation ended and therefore indicate to them that the scene is over.